What do you think of the repost?

She had pressed the snooze button 16 times, was up an hour and a half later than she had intended to be up, and wanted to go back to bed. She couldn’t. Yawning, and slowly crawling out of bed, Deanna realized what time it was, and ran to her bathroom to change, do her makeup, and brush her teeth. She could go down to the dining room to eat STH’s gourmet food, but there was no time for that and she was sure breakfast was over. Class started in five minutes. She looked out the window in her dorm room, wearing her Midnight Sky High school uniform: a navy blue silk tiered camisole, and black pleated accordion miniskirt. She sighed. It was another school day. Thinking of her favourite letters: T, G, I, and F (thank god it’s Friday) she grabbed her Michael Kors double breasted black trench coat, pulled on her black Jimmy Choo booties, stuffed her leather Prada bag with her school things, and ran out the door, nearly late for class. It was the beginning of the school year (only a week had passed), but Deanna already felt stressed and tired every day, even though her teachers were only giving a light stream of homework. petsmart coupon codes She strived to do her best, but her best just wasn’t good enough. She maintained a B average, which was quite good, but she didn’t think so. In fact, she felt that she was failing in life. She ran down the halls to first period English with Miss Anglebee- her favourite teacher. She was in her twenties, and was a very hip teacher, who happened to be very nice to Deanna. As soon as Deanna ran down the aisle of the midst of Chanel, Coach, and Burberry bags, and slid in her seat, the bell rang. She was finally on time. Miss Anglebee walked in her class, her long brown hair flying behind her, wearing a brown tank top and a turquoise hippie skirt. Miss Anglebee daintily walked over to the middle of the class, “Hi, everyone!” she said cheerfully. “Hi, Miss Anglebee,” the class muttered. “I have a new assignment for you, and I’ve decided to make it easier for you since it is the beginning of the school year.” There were a few groans, a few cheers, and a few confused faces wondering what the assignment was. Deanna was one of those people“I want you to write a biography about yourself. Make it as short or long as you want it to be.No guidelines or criteria,” Miss Anglebee said, “You have 30 minutes,”The class muttered amongst themselves, and decided that the assignment was simple enough. Deanna thought this should be simple. She pulled out her notebook and a pen from her bag, and started writing.My name isDeanna Chrysanthemum Von Rose. That’s the middle name I get when my parents were crazy hippies… Ok, well that’s a fail. Scratch thatMy name is Deanna C. Von Rose. My parents are complete weirdo’s…… Another fail Scratch that. “10 more minutes!” cheered Miss AnglebeeConcentrate!My name is Deanna Chrysanthemum Von Rose, but most people call me Dee, and I’ve been telling everyone that my middle name is Christina. I am in grade ten, and sixteen years old. I go to Snow Tree High- a private boarding school in New Jersey. Most of the girls here wear designer brands like Chanel, Prada, etc… And the guys wear Armani and La Coste My parents were hippies, and they decided that Chrysanthemum was the most beautiful name in the world. beat maker download My mom’s name is Rose (flower names are in the family coincidentally) and my dad’s name is Robert. I have a little brother named Sam, in eighth grade, but he claims we’re not related. My family’s home is a gigantic 30th floor apartment building penthouse suite in the upper east side of New York. At STH, my best friends are Kat, and Lola. They are both the funniest and most original people I have ever met. Kat is an artist and very unique, trying new things all the time. Lola is the fashion diva. Well, not really. She loves to try new fashions and hairstyles, and sometimes, they aren’t so pretty (but don’t tell her that). Maybe you’re wondering why I haven’t described me yet. It’s because I don’t know how to describe me. p90x2 workout My friends call me crazy, my teachers call my different, and my parents call me unique. What do I think I am? I think I am just plain Dee. Now, that was an award winner.i messed up on the school names- sorry!Answer by JohnnyIts kinda of californian.Are you sure your from new york?I think your story works ,i dont think you should be able to describe yourself,just keep talkiong about other people its called GOSSIP.give me some credit sista

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2 Responses to What do you think of the repost?

  1. The Angel of Music says:

    I think its good, could be better and sounds a little preppy teen cliche. And (this is something I always notice) there were quite a few grammar errors. And some things could be phrased better.
    But I think it could really go somewhere!!!! Keep writing!!!

  2. Arisu says:

    I do have a couple of editing suggestions. First of all, early in the story it says “Midnight Sky High” and later it says “Snow Tree High”, so you might want to decide which it will be. Also, if her last name is Von Rose and her mothers name is Rose, would that make her Rose Von Rose?

    I definitely like the story, and I would love it if you came and joined my site! All artists are welcome, so tell your friends!

    missalice.webs.com

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